Ducks: Queen of Frickin' Everything

I've always admired your writing, but I think this is the first opportunity I've ever had to tell you so....

You are an excellent word painter. Your descriptions are so eloquent and vivid, the scene really comes alive.

I also liked how, in breaking with the "tradition" of Whedonverse vampire fics, you said that Angel took a suddenly necessary breath, rather than the usual "unnecessary breath." KUDOS on that. I actually did a double take, followed by an inner, "Hey, cool!"

In summary, this was really, really good work. :-)